In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the state of young people after graduating and having a stable job continues to live with their parents more and more. I believe despite of positive benefits, drawbacks are more significant.
It cannot be denied that having two generations living under the same roof can optimize a number of issues. The biggest advantage is that young people's pressure will be reduced because they can save living expenses, such as housing, food, shopping,... Besides, owning a private living space is not an easy thing in an era of rising prices, especially real estate. Besides, many people have the mentality of not wanting to rent temporary accommodation but want to live in a decent space like their own house. In addition, the fact that parents and children live together also partly brings the two generations closer together. Family gatherings are no longer rare and young people have more opportunities to be cared for and grateful to their parents.
However, the increase in this trend has many shortcomings that affect both young people and the previous generation. First, this cohabitation can disrupt privacy and widen the generation gap. Active young people often have very different work and play plans from their parents, who have a minimalist lifestyle and need more than quiet. This can easily cause conflicts, tensions that are popular in multi-generational families; therefore, the mental of family members will not be comfortable. Secondly, for parents, the return of their children can be a burden. In fact, many young people rely on their parents to live more conveniently because they think they can entrust housework, child care, etc. to their grandparents so they can work with peace of mind. This affects the well-being of adults and their mental health. Finally, a further drawback is that young people have to deal with prejudices from society about sharing the house with their parents, while adults also concern about helping their children to have a full life. Thus, healthy and happy life will hardly happen without certain efforts and solutions.
In short, although living with parents has some advantages, I argue that the trouble of this outweighs its benefits when considering people’s independence and freedom.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, in fact, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24930747922 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68059612174 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3406178209 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7368421053 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309879679763 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095635718097 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904943625733 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212166788035 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703869125209 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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