In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Accommodation has been one of the major concerns in the world for decades because of growing population density. This leads to a case when young adults, specifically those who have finished education or their own career, keep sharing houses with their parents. This situation can bring back both advantages and disadvantages. While many people hold their belief that the cons can outweigh the pros, I have a contradictory opinion.
There is an obvious reason why people pursue their thinking in such a way. They often argue that when living with parents, young adults freedom, creativity and energy will be restricted mainly because of heavy dependence on their parents. Otherwise, people are unable to do whatever they want but to follow proper, even strict manners.
In contrast, I think whether people are energetic or not principally relies on their attitude towards such conditions. It is arguable to say that doing so can strengthen family bonds in a simple way, just by spending more time with parents daily, or on some special occasions. Furthermore, it will prevent parents from numerous fatal diseases such as blood clots and heart attacks. In addition, living with parents somehow guarantees a better future marriage, particularly in terms of raising children since grandparents have been proven to be capable of improving their grandchildren's moral qualities. Examples can be seen from everyday life when adults usually ask their parents to take care of their kids.
In conclusion, while many people believe that the disadvantages, in some circumstances, outweigh the advantages, I support a contrasting view due to its ability to correlate family members as well as moral, traditional values. I suggest that national authorities should pay more attention to this site to ensure more convenience for this type of accommodation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...ue that when living with parents, young adults freedom, creativity and energy will be ...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a simple way" with adverb for "simple"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...at doing so can strengthen family bonds in a simple way, just by spending more time with parent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then, well, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33219178082 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90739306174 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66095890411 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6938028489 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.214285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279758670376 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800743423502 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500610086108 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149682405972 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475632888044 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.