It is vital to have home of one's own, in few places of the world. Instead of, playing rent to live. This essay will examine the reasons behind it and I think it have more positives than negatives.
The main reason of having personal house is Security, relief from not dealing with the landlord every month. For instance, People in country like India, will not give their daughters hand in marriage if a house is not owned by the groom or his parents. Because, with this parents get a secure feeling of their child's future. Second reason is evolvement, desgining and innovation of own house. Everyone loves to enhance their way of living by adding more stuff to their respective homes for example, renovation of kitchen , plantation of vegetable in backyard but all of these desires cannot be fulfilled in appartment on rent. Thus, people buy their own home for sence of satisfaction. Thirdly, Hygiene a very onus element of living even if people rent a house, they have to make sure place accommodated is clean. As, usually when a basement is on liease, a common washroom and bathroom is allotted to diffent people, who live in various rooms. That is why, it is difficult to survive with others dirt. But, in person's own house they can maintain personal sanitation and be healthy and warm
Renting a house can be cost efficient, even though some people are not financially stable, they bear huge interest on house loans just to emphasize on their status in society, rather than that they can rent a house and improvise their standard of living by spending on other important factors like health, education. Hence, they will not end up in debt. If the house is rented, people can shift to another by providing a month prior notice to the owner whereas, to do same in own house person have to go through a hectic legal procedure. As a result, house on rent will be time effective with comfort.
To conclude, I reiterate that situation of having own house have more positive than negatives, rather than renting a home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, second, so, third, thirdly, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73371104816 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4691285519 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583569405099 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.8925715308 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2941176471 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218740637267 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659530655434 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572191683831 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155388274553 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343909427553 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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