in some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
It has been noticed that in some cultures, it is significate for people to purchasing a house. Obviously, there are numerous advantages to own a home rather than renting one. However, I believe the strong desire of having a home would conduct detrimental impact on society and individuals.
To begin with, a large number of people want to own a home because of economic and emotional benefits. For instance, if residents have enough savings for the initial payment, it is definitely a smart choice to pay for the mortgage rather than the rental, especially in the countries where rentals are as high as mortgages. Also, the ownership of a home produces a sense of security and settlement for people. They are no longer to move annually from a temporary place to live to another one, with their children and furniture. In summary, there are two main reasons why people would like to buy a property in some areas.
To my mind, it would be a negative situation when a larger population wants to buy a home while nobody lives in renting houses. To the whole society, the house price will be extremely high due to the demand for buying a house. Consequently, houses will be a luxury for the poor who need to save every penny for their drama homes. Individually, people, especially for the young generation, will live under great stress and may overwork for money. Even if they finally have the down payment, they would be bound by the mortgage and miss opportunities to enjoy and explore their life. Must owing a home is harmful socially and individually.
To conclude, people want to have a home for many reasons but the disadvantages of that cannot be ignored. The governments in those countries need to enforce laws to regulate the housing industry and advocate reasonable purchases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ety and individuals. To begin with, a large number of people want to own a home because of ec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84039087948 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73597796844 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579804560261 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0095919374 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254269044692 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823865703638 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481232861468 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154869912418 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305452887925 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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