In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In the reality, having an opinion suppose that definitely possessing an accommodation is crucial and better than renting one. In my point of view, i would probably have to say that it really depends.
To be honest, although our humanity is living in a wonderful standards, we also have to face with arrays of issues, esppecially a place to stay in. If you own enough money to purchase a permanent house yourself, it will satisfy your demands. By contrast, the only thing you ought to do is renting one.
To be more specific, let is consider the circumstance that you are not lacking of finance and proceed to have an home with a couple of advantages. First, clearly, you will have a place to live on your own. Besides that, You are also optional in designing your house following hobbies, topics. If you desire a modern decoration, of course you can do. Additionally, you do not need to pay attention to both the monthly expenses and renting fee so that it can help you saving money for other purposes.
By contrast, whether you do not have enough money to buy one, just rent it. Without an affluent wallet, renting an accommodation assist you a sleeping place and stuff like this. Regardless of a couple of drawbacks, a rental house is a prominent consideration. Firstly, you have a narrow but sufficient space for ordinary activities as well as cooking. But public living will have some problems and drawbacks such as using the same bathroom sometimes can be annoyed.
In conclusion, the final definition would probably that choosing a appropriate place to live will depend on your situation
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...nion suppose that definitely possessing an accommodation is crucial and better than renting one....
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Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... than renting one. In my point of view, i would probably have to say that it real...
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Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'standard'?
Suggestion: standard
...h our humanity is living in a wonderful standards, we also have to face with arrays of is...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... lacking of finance and proceed to have an home with a couple of advantages. First...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to save' or 'save'.
Suggestion: to save; save
...and renting fee so that it can help you saving money for other purposes. By contrast...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...definition would probably that choosing a appropriate place to live will depend o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, really, so, well, in conclusion, of course, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79710144928 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78597509229 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9109102907 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.75 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209153388257 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708899441462 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467369563275 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107618813545 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054659112324 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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