In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In several nations, there is a trend of preferring owning a house instead of renting one. This essay will discuss some elementary causes, and consider the nature of this development. Personally, I tend to side up with those supposing this is a negative one, as will now be argued.
The importance of house ownership is attributed to many reasons. Firstly, it seems to provide a sensation of stability. In other words, owning a home also means having a permanent living place without caring about searching for alternative accommodations to rent as well as short-term rental contracts which are temporary agreements. This is compounded by the fact that thanks to ownership of a house, individuals are likely to stand a chance of saving a considerable amount of money for house pricing every month, which reduces the monetary pressure. Finally, investment is also a reason for this trend. For instance, in Vietnam, after baking, the real estate market is always on top of the greatest domains that are predicted to keep growing in the upcoming time, especially in the post-pandemic period. Hence, allocating money for real estate assets, typically houses is considered a strategic method to prevent the money from losing its value due to the increased risk of inflation.
Nevertheless, despite the aforementioned reasons, I believe house ownership is unlikely to be a positive development. Take Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh city, which are the two biggest ones in Vietnam, as typical examples. it finds hard to purchase a house, particularly in places near the city center. Each flat in these metropolises has been priced at over 6 billion Vietnamese dongs while the average annual income of citizens is many times as less as this price; therefore, they can not afford to buy it. In addition, there are some cases where low-income individuals seem to have to take a huge loan from banks and suffer from the extra payment such as year-on-year interest amount, landing taxes, electricity, maintenance costs, and so on that get added to their daily expenses. This exerts a detrimental financial burden on their shoulders and leads to the risk of bankruptcy to gain dramatically, hence, negatively impact on the economic development of society generally.
In conclusion, homeownership is caused by various factors, namely stability, money-saving, and investment. However, besides these advantageous reasons, I still believe that it is not totally a positive trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2095959596 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01324639913 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7930021796 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.611111111 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3888888889 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211285546141 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589546040351 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049464583569 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121333209385 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786644226145 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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