Home ownership is considered to be crucial by many people these days rather than house renting. As far as I am concerned, this trend may stem from the freedom people who possess their own house have as well as no need to pay for increasing amount of price landlords demand.
There are two key reasons why significant number of people prefer house owning to house renting. First, people can avoid restraints landlords often put on them if they purchase a house. For instanse, they may not only decorate their home when they want without getting permisson from anybody but also refurbish it. This means that they can invest in their own property and satisfy themselves instead of doing so others' house. Furthermore, another factor is that some tenants find it challenging to negotiate the cost of staying in the house of owners. This is because these tenants want to offer moderate amount of payment for their rental while landlords want more than that, hence a conflict between them.
It seems that this trend is benefucial for not only developers who construct houses but also for society. On of the merits of people opting for having a real estate is that employees in housing industry can gain profit as the demand for houses is high, increasing the prices of houses. More people can be involved in building large apartment blocks ensuring that the living standards of them improve consequently. Second, people who possess theirbown home can have a decent lifestyle. They can prevent difficulties in retirement which otherwise people can face living in rented houses such as inablity to cover the payment of it since they earn insufficient amount of pensions nowadays.
By way of conclusion, I believe that the advantages of choosing to live in owned houses are substancial as far more enormous number of workers of housing sector can be employed and can earn stable income, and owners can live in prosperity without any obstacles they can confront when living in rented accommodation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'negotiating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: negotiating
...s that some tenants find it challenging to negotiate the cost of staying in the house of own...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, so, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97904191617 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57342426741 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556886227545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7573376773 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.785714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230980548941 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895603658024 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476342852078 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151255776234 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494779633826 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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