In some countries, small town-center shops are going out of business
because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people
without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and this may result in
an increase in the use of cars.
Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
in several nations these days are traveling a long distance to reach shopping centers. This practice has created enormous pressure on small urban shops and has led to certain problems for citizens. in my opinion, the drawbacks of this trend, which are the inaccessibility of urban people and pollution problems, are not adequate enough to overshadow the merits, including cheaper goods and the decline in urban population.
On the one hand, the existence of large rural shops has made people living in towns or cities have less opportunity to purchase food, clothes, or other necessities. Indeed, urban citizens are often overwhelmed by their daily hectic schedules, therefore, they could not spare a long time driving to out-of-town stores. This certainly has resulted in the poor living standard of urban citizens as they are usually not satisfied with what they need. Moreover, by either using car or public transit to reach such shopping centers people are releasing more CO2 into the atmosphere, compared to walking or cycling to shops nearby. The rise of carbon footprint can damage the environment and create pollution, particularly air pollution.
However, people can buy more inexpensive products at large far- to -reach shops. If businesses do not have to pay taxes and spend millions of dollars on land ownership in cities or towns, the prices of goods may be lowered substantially. Another possible advantage of out-of-town shops is that it can greatly reduce overpopulation in urban areas. In other words, as stores and shopping centers are situated in the countryside, some individuals and families might be forced to relocate their place of living, whereby decreasing the population and lending a way for urban residents to have a better life. In Singapore, recent research shows that 25% of urban dwellers have moved to live in the countryside due to the availability of such shops.
In conclusion, although the disadvantages of out-of-town stores may result in environmental issues or inconvenience among citizens, there are some benefits which have to be taken into account, which are cheap goods and the reduction in the population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27826086957 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90072961583 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591304347826 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1423482582 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.071428571 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297733055384 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084822928364 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586499854043 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169483498792 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593277725399 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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