In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
In many nations, there has been a trend of shopping in big out-of-town stores, which is problematic for small town-center shops and leads to the escalation in cars usages when people who do not possess these vehicles may find it challenging to gain the access to these large shops. In my opinion, I suppose that this phenomenon brings more pros than cons because of the reasons that I am going to mention in this essay
On the one hand, looking on the bright side, moving to stores that are outside the city can help alleviate the traffic congestion in the center as well as offer consumers more choices. When there are a host of shops in the center, people would flock to them and consequently causing traffic jams, which has always been a big issue in many metropolises when it directly deteriorates the atmosphere by releasing tons of emissions. Meanwhile, the bigger a shop is, the more products they sell, thus, this would not only benefit shoppers by a wide range of choices but also the whole economy by the revenue they make
On the other hand, it is obviously more inconvenient and immobile for people to travel in a long-distance despite purchasing a few items, especially for non-car-owners. In some circumstances, people do not go shopping with long lists of goods, in fact, some of them are just looking for only a couple of things that they have just run out of. As a result, it can be a big nuisance for these people to transport through hundreds of miles just to buy a few products. In addition, going to stores plays an important role in everyone’s life, therefore, without a car, many people would have to suffer more to reach those out-of-town stores
To conclude, although both positivity and negativity can be found in the favoritism of big outer-city shops. I strongly believe that its advantages can absolutely out shadow the drawbacks as it helps ease the traffic congestion in the city center but also develops the national economy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, i suppose, in addition, in fact, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77712609971 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74756428219 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554252199413 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4063969835 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 203.625 106.682146367 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.625 20.7667163134 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.5 7.06120827912 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29982914565 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122437100607 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959611002201 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162050061237 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121363821145 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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