In some countries students have to learn two or more languages at school Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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In some countries, students have to learn two or more languages at school.

Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Nowadays, from students are being required two or more languages at school.In my opinion,there are some advantages such as in business and student's knowledge .
Starting with advantages, these days some countries are teaching their students two or more languages, because recent tense requires them because If people want to do business they have to know necessary languages and that can help when they are cooperating as well as that can bring income for their business and it can change their economy of their country. Secondly a lot of school have start teaching more languages from first class, because some information are in different languages which is the most necessary dates. knowing languages can improve student's outlook and knowledge . With it they can work foriegn country , especially they have a opportunities to study there .

Unfortunately, there are some disadvantages ,for example ,in the world have different culture ,they are not suitable for each other some countries are muslim they always wear long clothes but other not .
That can destroy student's behaviour and their thoughts mostly girls because they tend to wear different clothes and they may want to dress like them this may be issue in some countries

In conclusion, even if there are benefits for business and education they do not have to imitate their action otherwise students' moral may be violated and their attitude to their parents may alter to bad site

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, as well as that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21888412017 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66110717937 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55364806867 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.710818257 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.714285714 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2857142857 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.1428571429 7.06120827912 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311600280329 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164520155024 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086449823725 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177164100459 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106157355799 0.056905535591 187% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, as well as that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments