In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
A more developed world as today does not have a high opinion on immediate university studies anymore. Instead, a gap year between high school and university is getting more popularity. From my perspectives, this choice has both pros and cons as following.To begin with, a gap year is extremely beneficial. Firstly, a free year can provide students with a myriad of experience and knowledge. they can challenge themselves in different positions, jobs and responsibilities. Moreover, in this year, they have an opportunity to meet and learn from numerous people. As a result, students are more likely to find their passion, which is undoubtedly crucial when choosing their study field in the future.
However, this decision also has some negative points. In particular, after a year out of school, students are easy to forget their academic knowledge such as maths, literature or geography to the university entrance exam. In addition, when they retake it, there will be no friends of teachers besides them to boost their determination and motivation. they will stand a chance of falling behind other candidates. Consequently, the gate of university will be far away from them.
Taking everything into consideration, spending a year after high school for work and travel have two sides according to one’s personal situations. Whether of not to do this should be regarded carefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, as to, in addition, in particular, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29864253394 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02987047038 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660633484163 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3001705494 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6428571429 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183383205346 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587458780859 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528778014303 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127321111723 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495855967837 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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