Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.

Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Experts are of the idea that it would be ideal for children to learn a foreign language at primary school instead of secondary school. The advantages for these beliefs are outweighed by disadvantages as primary school children are less mature and many tend to forget a learnt subject.

Primary school going children are at an age where they are optimistic and eager to learn and explore new subjects. This is an advantage to teach them a foreign language from this young age. The language teaching to such a group will be considered fun as it would be something new, as compared to their elder siblings in secondary who may perceive learning a new language as difficult or even boring. Thus more primary children can be taught a new language like French easily especially if one of their classmates is a native of the language learnt, who can inspire them to learn and use the new language.

However, on the other side, due to their immaturity primary children may not understand the importance of learning a foreign language. If a student has no exposure to speaking it on a regular basis in the case of both parents not knowing the language they may tend to ignore what they learnt. Consequently, most of these students will forget the language as they reach their secondary level and even in future where it would be needed to interact with foreign people for example while touring a foreign country or interacting with a foreign exchange student.

To conclude, I believe teaching students while in secondary is better as they would have a better memory and grasp of the importance of learning the foreign language, which they can later utilize in life.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, second, so, thus, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83216783217 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60886026649 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506993006993 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.007923936 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.2 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365847965787 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165571127658 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116553719259 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243506273998 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146360638461 0.056905535591 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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