Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Like two sides of a coin, people have always discussed whether attire or the work quality is important. Though I will highlight points pertaining to both the views i believe that both the aspects are important.
Firstly, people would often judge others based on the looks and the dress that is worn by others. A person's attire speaks for them. In this competitive world impression plays a crucial role in getting ahead in our carrier. For instance, my uncle who runs a business always dresses in a formal way as there can be numerous meeting with clients that are fixed up in the last minute. Since he has learnt from his experience, he always suggests us to dress up in a similar manner.
Secondly, A person is recruited for the quality he possesses and that they command a great respect for themselves by showcasing their talents and qualities. It is quiet often that such people reach a high position in an organisation quite easily with their talents. For Instance, In my old organisation a young person was recruited as by boss because he had passed out from IIM. Though he was a fresher the quality of education helped him get that position.
To conclude, Since talented and well educated people climb up the corporate ladder quite easily, it is even more important for them to dress smartly as they can be an inspiration for others. The above points substantiate my views that a smart dress and quality of work go hand in hand.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ttire or the work quality is important. Though I will highlight points pertaining to b...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ght points pertaining to both the views i believe that both the aspects are impor...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a formal way" with adverb for "formal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ncle who runs a business always dresses in a formal way as there can be numerous meeting with c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a similar manner" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ence, he always suggests us to dress up in a similar manner. Secondly, A person is recruited for...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'quiet'.
Suggestion: often quiet
...sing their talents and qualities. It is quiet often that such people reach a high position ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oss because he had passed out from IIM. Though he was a fresher the quality of educati...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70750988142 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56054496301 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596837944664 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0199262611 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6153846154 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158979342502 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558902782831 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340066558945 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992815128701 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233005956292 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ttire or the work quality is important. Though I will highlight points pertaining to b...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ght points pertaining to both the views i believe that both the aspects are impor...
^
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a formal way" with adverb for "formal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ncle who runs a business always dresses in a formal way as there can be numerous meeting with c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a similar manner" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ence, he always suggests us to dress up in a similar manner. Secondly, A person is recruited for...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'quiet'.
Suggestion: often quiet
...sing their talents and qualities. It is quiet often that such people reach a high position ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oss because he had passed out from IIM. Though he was a fresher the quality of educati...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70750988142 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56054496301 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596837944664 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0199262611 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6153846154 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158979342502 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558902782831 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340066558945 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992815128701 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233005956292 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.