Are you one of these employees where company requires all workers to wear uniforms? It has become a controversial issue whether people should wear formally or focus on their productivity of work instead. In this essay, I would point out different perspectives.
Firstly, wearing uniforms at work plays a huge role to certain companies. One of the main reasons is because the clients would buy products from their shop. If their appearance looks too casual, buyers would think that the items are terrible as well. When I was at college, I had worked as a smart phone promoter for 2 days. At first, I was dressed badly and it was only when the second day that I realized many customers were interested with the phone. But why? Simply because I started wearing suits.
Secondly, some banks and airlines are so concerned about what their staff wear. Therefore, corporations often provide specific uniforms for them. In my opinion, I think this is a good thing because I can identify who is responsible for the business. I once had a terrible experience where I complained about the food to ordinary people. This, It is better to dress formally.
However, if you work in a school office, clerks often wear casually. The staff would assert that how hard the work is important rather than what they wear. As long as they do their job effectively, clothes does not matter. To support this argument, Mark Zuckerberg wears plain grey T-shirt when attending the office.
In conclusion, running the business while dressed in uniform is ethical for the company's success. However, to certain job environment, being smart is more essential than what they wear. Therefore, I believe the debate varies according to the occupation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9723183391 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65945263277 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63321799308 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1137055937 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.4285714286 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7619047619 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103809933141 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293173213295 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022983258823 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583575939098 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158561799948 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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