Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
There is no doubt that children certainly fond of toys. As a result, many parents buy a lot of toys for their sons or daughters. They believe that toys can implement child’s learning, ranging mental to physical development. Some say this is an important part of junior’s life, while others argue it causes more harm than good. In this essay, I will discuss at both sides of the argument and give my opinion.
There are several positive effects of toys on the growth of children. With advancement in research and technologies, toys have become more interactive and innovation over the years. Obviously, there are much research points that mental and physical efficiency are raised by playing toys. Furthermore, they make opportunities which parents can spend time, talk or even look after their child. Lastly, supporters of buying toys highlight the responsibility that children will learn. They also say that this skill leads to greater adulthood success later in life.
On the other hand, opponents of serving more toys to childhood life feel that it uses up money which could be better spent on books such as drawing books. In addition, it might be said that it is unwise to give guns or swords to children to play with their friends which probably make them more aggressive. If parental awareness is not enough, their children would suffer from feeling isolation and less communicate with worldwide social. Unfortunately, socializing nowadays problems caused by isolated experiences in young age.
In conclusion, although it is common belief that buying a lot of toys will enhance intelligence for children, I believe it is not necessary and that it waste budget in the majority of cases. Personally, I think toys should be judged to the only thing which helps increase child’s development.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, lastly, look, so, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14189189189 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81583328568 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628378378378 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6321439588 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5294117647 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235065179974 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723940698497 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517626204658 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140964322825 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107846030655 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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