Some peope believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children)
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer nad include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Write at least 250 words
These days it is argued that number of people consider, that community service works should be part of high school programs for free. As a form of such as volunteer, for charity, keeping in touch always with neighbourhoods or as a teachinh activities.This essay partially agree with this statement and will make appropriate own arguments followed by relevant conclusion.
The main morality of community work is to improve interrelationship between high school pupils and society. These days so often school pupils visit to the charity events or help to the older people. We have to admit that the ideological and behaviroal outcomes of those process are immeasurable.For instance, in my home town in Shymkent, high school students go to the center for charity events organizers in order to help them in their spare time. On the other side, participating to the community service gives feeling to the students, that they play extremely vital role in society.
However, it does not seem to me, that shuld be compulsory programs. If community service become as a compulsory service, it will lessen schedule for other important subjects. Insted of making community service as a compulsory programe, teachers should increase their efforts giving patriotic and moral values to the students through their lectures. The reason is charities should not be compulsary as a moral. For instance, according to the latest research, which conducted by Oxford University, eighty precent of respondents said, that they want to take part in community services by their own desires, not by compulsory actions. Even though, more than half of respondents said that participating to the social services for them is as civil commitment.
As far as I am concerned, the community services does not make sence real to be being compulsory. Nevertheless, community works should be the most attractive social vaues among all members of society. In that case only, we will bring stable and prosperous society, where everybody loves help one another.
At last but not least, all humans are member of our common house, which called the Earth. Community services should be become as a main moral principle of the society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18926553672 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90390671331 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564971751412 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6434853188 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.058823529 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303838363994 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972335484907 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612537030868 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160027821985 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567862447942 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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