Some people are born to be leaders, while others believe leadership can be learnt.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Over the past decades, people have differing views about whether leadership skill is instinctive or acquirable. Personally judging, while it is often stated that leaders are naturally destined, I am of the opinion that this skill can be comprehended. In this essay, I am going to analyze the aforementioned opinions and give reasons for my supported one.
On one side of the argument, there is a portion that believes leadership is hereditary. In fact, it is understandable that a virtue can be transcended generations. A typical example illustrating this statement is Samsung Group, a South Korea-based conglomerate company. Established in 1938, Samsung has been one of the most thriving companies on a global scale. This great progress has been maintained and developed by the lead of blood-related sons of its founder for nearly a century until now. Therefore, the perspective of inherited leadership is reasonable.
However, I would argue that there is almost nothing that people cannot learn, including leadership skills. I strongly concur with those who claim that there are several factors that make a person a great leader, such as discipline, resourcefulness and empathy. For instance, Barack Obama is the first African-American president of the United States. Thanks to his strong determination and inspirational speeches, he has made America great in various socio-economic aspects during his appointment. His father is not a president, but he has proved himself worth this honored position. Thus, leadership is also acquirable for those who desire it.
To conclude, although the basic factor contributing to leadership can be controversial whether it is natural or learnable, I still stick to the latter viewpoint. In other words, I strongly believe that leadership can be acquired theoretically and practically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48763250883 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31271660777 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632508833922 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5719169128 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.3529411765 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248750820462 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722708141022 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792724126283 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155248178403 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858620404312 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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