Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.
There has been a recent debate about the importance of the occupation in everyone's life. It is generally agreed that having a pleasing job is considered by more people than earning a lot of money for a living. However, some might claim that the more income we have, the better our life would be.
To start with, money would be vital to us because people can use it to afford most of the things in life. Our everyday needs such as food, water or electricity all involve the spending of some income. For wealthy people, they have a better living standard so they are able to live comfortably because they earn enough to pay for what they need. Moreover, some believe that their hobbies and interests are fulfilled with the help of money. For instance, if you do not have enough cash in hand, you will not think of a trip to another country.
Nevertheless, a number of young people claim that they feel an attraction to a pleasing job. It is really difficult to do something you do not like. From the example of one of the most successful people in the world like Steve Jobs, he was so into computers and he had revolutionized the fields of them. Job satisfaction does not only bring us happiness in our life, but it also helps people to create good relationships with people around us. As an illustration, when a teacher loves his job so much, he will have a lot of motivations to be able to deliver his lessons to the students effectively. Therefore, both the teacher and the students benefit from this.
In conclusion, the amount of money we can get is quite significant but enjoying the happy moments our job brings us seems good for the young generation. Therefore, in my opinion, I prefer finding a workplace which could lead me to self-satisfaction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60317460317 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71015930655 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584126984127 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7448547525 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252888657603 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758040239313 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593130723208 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155467606187 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767771050138 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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