Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, children have been authorized to do everything and choose freely more than the past. While, some people insist that every choice is Childs' right and it should not be confined, others maintain that it could bring several social abnormalities like too spoiled children without sense of sympathy to others difficulties. In my opinion, freedom to choose is a perquisite for society; however it differs with too much spoiling that could create arrogance and ignorance behavior in these Childs.
Freedom of choosing is a vitally important and even beneficial for both children and society. Firstly, it provokes sense of authorization and powerfulness in adulthood which could be results in more confident Childs who can cope with their own hurdles without much difficulty. The second noteworthy issue is that whenever they have right to choose even unimportant things, it would be much easier to perceive the results instantly. For example when they buy new clothes and just pay attention to the style and not quality, they will soon experience irritating with those clothes and try to avoid for the second time. Eventually, it leads to make better decisions in upcoming future and utilize the other`s advice.
Nevertheless, everything has their own merits and setbacks. However, Childs who experienced too much indulgence are in the verge of not have sufficient knowledge to tackle with their future`s pitfalls. In other words, they have lack of well-recognition of surrounding and far from reality. They accustomed to have everything right away which may causes devastating impact on their personal character and the society as a whole. For example, if they cannot catch their wishes, they become frustrated or demonstrate villain mannerism.
As the arguments outlined above, I reaffirm my position which freedom of choosing is so important and make them to improve their latter on decisions. Admittedly, it had better to be controlled and monitored by parents and conducted them in an adequate way not giving them a sense of over-indulgency.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 348, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
...that whenever they have right to choose even unimportant things, it would be much ea...
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Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an adequate way" with adverb for "adequate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...monitored by parents and conducted them in an adequate way not giving them a sense of over-indulge...
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Line 4, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...giving them a sense of over-indulgency.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, well, while, for example, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33128834356 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94078844305 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592024539877 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4409220826 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.866666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175953758185 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586800661014 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460793913971 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980800199612 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266760293017 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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