Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both of views and give your opinion,
Although, making decision is individuals' rights, it is commonly believed that children should have adults' consult because it might impact on them. However, this notion is not straghfoward, for many, they argue that the young-age child can make their own choices for food, clothes which are relevant to their daily life, This essay will debate both of the views and give my opinion.
On the one hand, there are major of benefits for letting children decide what they have to deal in their daily life. Firstly, those ones who early make decision seem to be more confident and independent than others. This is because, they have to take the responsibilities for their choices. If these things happen such in a good way, they can proud of it. However, in the worse situation, they will be in charge of their mistakes and deeply remember in order to avoid next time. As a result, blaming-culture may gradually get rid of in life.
On the other spectrum, it is no doubt that most of wrong decisions lead to unexpected results. In some cases, they are even extremly terrible. Children who do not have enough experiences may struggle to make effective choices. For instance, it can be clearly seen that almost every child is deep tinto sweet and fast food because of its tasty without cognition of how these food can deteriorate their health. So, in this case, if parents do not interfere to give children a healthy diet, obesity, early diabety maybe inevitable, Furthermore, being self-center is also considered as consequence of self-decision making in children. The reason is to get exact what they want, they will do any things as much as possible and ignore surroundings even if those thing can have severe effect on the others.
In conclusion, as far as I concerned, I do believe that letting children make their own choices is such a good thing however it needed to be just sometime in the light of aforementioned reasons as well as its drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: THESE_ONES[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'those' instead.
Suggestion: those
...e to deal in their daily life. Firstly, those ones who early make decision seem to be more...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...e of its tasty without cognition of how these food can deteriorate their health. So, in th...
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Line 3, column 750, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'those things'?
Suggestion: this thing; those things
...ossible and ignore surroundings even if those thing can have severe effect on the others. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82089552239 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69493555702 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564179104478 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5990098929 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204397244294 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663324532683 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507388332366 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147554749985 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518635998401 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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