Along with the development of society, the conciousness of children tends to make progress tempared to the old ego. There arearguments between whether we should let them decide in whatever issues or not. This essay will express my point of view and suggestions about this problem.
In terms of not allowing children to make their own choices, people could direct them to the way that they want their kids to be in the future. This is also a common way of education in most of Eastern countries like Vietnam. It is believed that by imitating the actions done by adults in fore, children could be able to form their proper roots from every small stuff in life. Otherwise, they might have unethical thoughts and opinions that affect perspectives of human beings such as just insisting on their own wishes and not caring about others, for example.
On the other hand, making decisions on daily matters, from food, clothes to entertainment without being controlled by their parents has many benefits that need to be considered. Firstly, children can leam a trait of independence even though they are still young. They are definitely less bound to the lives of their parents, which results in a freer lifetime and early responsibilities for what they did. Secondly, this is also the foundation of critical thinking. Kids would have known about choosing the most efficient method to cope with different situations around them and gaining experience gradually for enhancing their behaviors.
In conclusion, I assume that parents should let society train their children and not interfere let too much to their offsprings' businesses, which help to set up solely unique characteristics of individuals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09352517986 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75534872323 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643884892086 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3147196303 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310288754354 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876969459804 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717515667497 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161194113759 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799032951074 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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