Some people believe allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Childhood is the most memorable phase in everyone's life as children grasp basic things like walking, talking, eating and sensing things around. Infancy is a time of learning and adulthood is performing what we have acquired physically, mentally and emotionally. Discussing on whether restricting children or to leave to their free will, will be analysed before giving a final verdict.
There is a quote given by mother Teresa "it is easier to build a child than repairing an adult". Most likely, all the behavioral patterns root in childhood itself and it takes a lot to learn and implement in older age. Therefore, every step and action of people surrounding infants would be a great influence on the kid. So, they should be under continuous monitoring and guidance of parents or other family members. Elders in family should accept the choice of children in basic things like food, clothes and entertainment which helps them understand the importance of decision making.
Yet, parents should motivate children from choosing clothes that disguise and encourage them to opt for clothing that serve the purpose . And then, teach the value of healthy food which is beneficial for their healthy well-being. Coming to entertainment, parents must pursue them to go for arts and out-door activities that enhance their creativity and metabolism. Also, make them know the importance of charity and satisfaction lying in giving to the need. Along with the above measures, parallelly they should warn the dangers of strangers in physical and virtual world who are lurking to devour the kids. Child lock, setting time to use gadgets etc., will be helpful to protect them from seeing unneccessary content in internet and from perverts that destroy their mental condition.
Finally, it is obvious that children learn from their parents so elders should serve as role model participating what they preach.Neither giving freedom in all nor restricting them is not good. Elders should decide which things to allow and which things to restrict
In my opinion, I don't think it is selfish in choosing what they like when it won't affect their future. Instead there will be a sense of security and taking responsibility of their choices will be established.
Over all, There is one life and everyone should be given the chance to choose, as life will not allow us to choose later except accepting others decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, then, therefore, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17857142857 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70553228634 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579081632653 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4642654451 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.777777778 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168441284852 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508900436572 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372296333539 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817619839348 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338371063345 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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