Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and 6 can make you successful.Discuss both views& give your opinion?
Many offspring ponder that good sport players belonging their family because they have natural ables whereas few adolescent consider that smart work and focus very essential for any fields.There are manifold reasons behind this.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right perspective.
Gone on the days,nowadays handwork is key word for achieve goal in whole life without any ambition kids could not do any things.After that, who are plethora teenagers belong sport families but also they never interest in physical games such as cricket, tennis,football,badminton and so on.Moreover,this line only for responsible masses as well as youth can represent for nation that's why it is no matter which person have natural facilities in their family.
Flipping towards, hardworking is very important part of life.Hence players can not do handwork in their lines as far as they never do exercise and fitness so it is very bad impact for players life.Otherwise,
they must not awareness about prepare after start the games than sport players should not help with anyone.Lastly,in my point of view it is not indispensable player have natural facilities without any experience, handwork and practice either selecting anybody.
All said and done,I reckon,in my mind it is very good rules made by government than they had only choosing handwork players in the sports.Thus,it is not a immense issue players need natural abilitihardeork youngster might do hardwork and they can achieve everything whatever who want it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, i reckon, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40329218107 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17880391395 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658436213992 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.1351782125 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 328.25 106.682146367 308% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.75 20.7667163134 293% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.5 7.06120827912 333% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0705458676023 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461091332173 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00957923572414 0.0667982634062 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.041487331796 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152399859875 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.4 13.0946893788 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.58 50.2224549098 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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