Some people believe that children can be better educated by being taught at home rather than by attending lessons at school. To what extent do you agree with this idea?
Nowadays, having good manners and well-rounded knowledge is often perceived as a method to define an individual's social status. As a result, some parents have become more concerned about their child's growth and started to take responsibility by making them attend homeschooling. However, it is still argued if this mean can surpass the quality and professionalism in the information provided by a teacher.
On one hand, educational institutions simulate the quotidian world. There are myriad of people with the same aims and access to information. However, only some succeed in differentiating from others by the amount of effort they put through, their understanding of complex data or other individual traits. This lead to a competition of surpassing nearby people in a hastiness of uncovering your qualities and uniqueness. Hence, the pupil is encouraged to develop continuously until he achieves his best form. Moreover, children do not have to be alone during this process as they have the possibility to discuss with teachers. Those play the role of a critic who is impartial and sincere. Thereupon, each kid is able to discover his true strengths and weaknesses.
On the other hand, learning from home is time-saving and can facilitate a better exploration of information. Nevertheless, the quality of learning is conditioned by the parent's ability to explain the lessons. As they have little experience in this domain, they could make the acquiring of knowledge an even harder mission for their sons and daughters. Even so, homeschooling is a private learning method. It focuses only on the child's needs and all the interest is directed only to him. Thus, only what is considered helpful is learned, with no filling data.
To sum up, I believe that a child's educational process should take place not only at home but also supervised by a teacher. Only this way, the pupil can experience the differences between individual and teamwork and therefore prepare rigorously for overcoming the future's hardships.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...s often perceived as a method to define an individuals social status. As a result, some parent...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n provided by a teacher. On one hand, educational institutions simulate the qu...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...ality of learning is conditioned by the parents ability to explain the lessons. As they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, even so, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26315789474 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08622303056 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609907120743 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4866740767 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4736842105 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172279002987 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423952681059 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455637304767 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943594533178 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327631362555 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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