These days the benefits and drawbacks of the introduction of computerization are such a debatable question among the people. Some of them claim that the computer has many side effects on human health, while others argue that the computer is a vital tool in our daily life. In this following essay I will examine both sides of the argument.
There is no doubt that the computer has many functions which help to facilitate a person’s work. To start with, these days every office and home have their own computers that keep all information about their work. For example, if someone needs to create a report from last year to today, she or he will use only one click of a computer keyboard to filter information. Moreover, with the advent of the Internet and state of the art technologies people can achieve knowledge wherever they are, particularly when the world faced Coronavirus infection, many people were forced to stay at home. However, using the computer people found a way to solve this issue, for instance, by teaching children remotely and providing all social services online through computers.
Despite the enormous benefits from computers,unfortunately, there are some side effects for human health. According to the latest data, after using the computer for a long time people feel headache and decreased vision. In addition, working all day at the computer causes spinal deformities and obesity.
To sum up, the computer is a significant technology which helps us to save our time during working time and the best tools to get knowledge when people cannot visit school or university. Regarding health problems which are caused by the computer, individuals can solve these kinds of issues using special glasses when they are at the computer and doing some physical activity after working or studying.
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...cal activity after working or studying.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08361204013 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80589051008 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612040133779 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0014477934 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223295827704 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759366320443 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428351962931 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134772687232 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169259687973 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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