Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A few subjects are as likely to provoke controversy as crime and its reasons. While a number of people think that crime is a consequence of bad person’s characteristic, I would argue that person’s surrounding environment and its issues trigger a high crime rate.
On the one hand, there are various social problems affect seriously to the formation of crime. Firstly, developing countries seem to have a higher crime rate, comparison with developed countries. The reasons could be that in these poor nations, there are a significant amount of homeless people and the poor, who live in abject poverty. As the result, they resort to crime with the aim of making ends meet. Secondly, the gender imbalance is also another factor that causes grave crime such as rape, human trafficking or kidnapping. A good example of this case is that in India, the proportion of man is higher than women, ergo, the official leaders are facing the high rate of rape in presents.
On the other hand, there are more social problem’s influences involved in establishing wrong behaviors than conceding crime is a result of bad person’s natural personality. With the explosion of technology at an astonishing pace, criminality which relate to the effects of technology is escalating alarmingly. Patterns of bad behaviors that copy from unplausible TV programs could shape worse child’s personality, which could be taken as a particularly salient example of this. In addition, bullying friends in schools would have pronounced effects to breed future offenders.
After discussing all the points mentioned above, it is therefore safe to conclude that social problems and poverty have the impact directly on breaking law.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29197080292 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02367802565 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616788321168 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4559150289 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311515671501 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955468313794 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954821981689 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166271769039 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609603540976 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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