May people argue that some countries still have disadvantaged people such as the homeless and unemployed. Therefore, the government should not raise funds for international aid. I partially agree with this view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraph.
On the one hand, while the country is facing difficulties in economy and human resources, the government should prioritize supporting its own citizens over other countries. First of all, More factories and housing should be built to create the job opportunities as well as support accommodation for citizens. In addition, state budget should be spent on erecting schools to improve the country’s citizens’ level. For instance, Prime Minister Pham Minh Chinh donated 10 billion VND to underprivileged people to help sustain their lives. From my point of view, these solutions can be seen to reduce an unemployment rate and improve people’s living standard. It obvious that only when each individual in the country gets higher living standard can a country be fully developed.
On the other hand, the state budget should also be contributed to help other countries so as to strengthen solidarity and foster cross-border relationship. Moreover, it is an expression of benevolence, a symbolize human decency for other countries. The government can support the country which was attacked by the natuaral disasters such as flood, earthquake....by money or by human resources. Take the earthquake in Mexico in 2023 as an example, after the disaster the country recceived much assistance from other ones all over the world to rescue its people and overcome the difficulties.
In conclusion, So long as the disadvantaged, the homeless and the unemployed still remain in own country, a country should support its people instead of using money for international aids. This is a solution that supports the own country's development more and more.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... be contributed to help other countries so as to strengthen solidarity and foster cross-...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...er, it is an expression of benevolence, a symbolize human decency for other countries. The ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37209302326 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10827127455 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2212603524 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9333333333 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207012137823 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074476793734 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743538894675 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153730178202 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817581476201 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... be contributed to help other countries so as to strengthen solidarity and foster cross-...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...er, it is an expression of benevolence, a symbolize human decency for other countries. The ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37209302326 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10827127455 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2212603524 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9333333333 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207012137823 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074476793734 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743538894675 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153730178202 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817581476201 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.