Some people believe that government should spend money on new building rather than renovating existing building. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Government spending has always been a debatable issue especially with the constructions. While the government spends their money for constructing new buildings can result in various advantages such as population emigration and local city activation, renovating existing buildings can be beneficial financially. In my perspective, while I understand that the constructing of new buildings can provide various important facilities that can encourage people to move between cities, renovating buildings can be financially saved and which money can be used for the better communities.
Construction of new buildings has advantages for the areas to improve its environmental view by providing various important buildings. When the government is constructing new buildings, usually those are necessary for those areas such as public health facilities, entertainment complexes, hospitals and schools. With the introduction of newer facilities can lead to a population emigration between cities in order to get the opportunity to try for modernized and cleaner environments. Thus, it can help the areas to have modernized look by constructing various building structures.
However, constructing a new building can take lots of time and money for the government. In Perth, for example, budgeted the money for more than $ 30 billion to design Marine City to be similar to Singapore but which took more than 20 years to construct and due to this delayed in construction causes traffic jams. In opposite, in the case of Melbourne, they renovated their cities every year because of wear and tear, so the money saved from doing renovation instead, had used to improve public health systems – elderly pension services, school facilities and hospital development supports. Therefore, from these two cities use of government monies, we can conclude that the government budgets should use to renovate on buildings so that the rest of monies can be used to improvement of other public benefits and entitlements.
In conclusion, the budgeted money from the government to be used on creating new buildings in the areas can have short term attractiveness from the public as well as financial issues. Therefore, it will be better to use government money on renovation and enhance the public entitlements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$30'.
Suggestion: $30
...ample, budgeted the money for more than $ 30 billion to design Marine City to be sim...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'look', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275324675325 0.247107183377 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.150649350649 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0961038961039 0.0946595960268 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0337662337662 0.0501214627716 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0233766233766 0.0437548338989 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135064935065 0.122226691241 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0545454545455 0.0403226058552 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.18002517096 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0415584415584 0.0326793684256 127% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0727272727273 0.0861772015684 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0363636363636 0.021408717616 170% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0103896103896 0.011925033212 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2286.0 1933.35771543 118% => OK
No of words: 353.0 316.048096192 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.47592067989 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.399433427762 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.334277620397 0.28420135186 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.266288951841 0.203846283523 131% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.223796033994 0.137316102897 163% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18002517096 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509915014164 0.56093040696 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.9786653516 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 27.1538461538 20.7743622355 131% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.535211187 49.517814964 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.846153846 127.492653851 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1538461538 20.7743622355 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 60.5816081935 49.1944974215 123% => OK
Elegance: 2.2375 1.69124875643 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160168169178 0.332605444948 48% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.157750919774 0.102741220458 154% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0905085797798 0.0668466124924 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.598486131109 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155691873355 0.148594505496 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803757862197 0.134430193775 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368081007186 0.0742795772207 50% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.427398688481 0.324371583561 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0175259132253 0.0638462369009 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115751007735 0.228012699653 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242657197145 0.058150111329 42% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.