Some people believe that governments should pay for healthcare and education, but others disagree with this opinion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this age of miracles, government of any particular nation has responsibilities to provide all possible comforts and services to its masses. Whether government should pay for the healthcare and education or not has sparked a heated debate. In this essay I would like to address my view in for and against of the topic with my opinion
According to some proportion of people, government is elected by the local inhabitants for their betterment and the bright future of their kids. Thence, it is major responsibility of government to provide lucrative facilities in term of free education and healthcare. Additionally, it is said that, healthy mind lies within the healthy body. Thus, government should attract their masses with tempting offers in order to keep them fit and fine so they may represent their nation in better way. Others have conflicting views.
They strongly oppose the idea of providing free healthcare and education. According to them, government has humungous responsibility to maintain the balance between all facilities for their people and consider this as wastage of money. What is more, They believe that, main focus of government should be boosting the economy, to be counted among the best economy nation
From my notion, as we aware that not only health and education but their are lakhs of other issues to be focused for the administration. I believe only brilliant students and super athlete ought to be provided by the facilities of free service so they may feel honoured for the efforts which they may have put to portray and make their nation proud
To recapitulate, since we cant push health and education on back seat. But to be aware of other big duties of government, only superior in the business should attain benefits of free services
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241379310345 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.156739811912 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0940438871473 0.0946595960268 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0219435736677 0.0501214627716 44% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0752351097179 0.0437548338989 172% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.144200626959 0.122226691241 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0438871473354 0.0403226058552 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82902427341 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0438871473354 0.0326793684256 134% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0658307210031 0.0861772015684 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0282131661442 0.021408717616 132% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00626959247649 0.011925033212 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1787.0 1933.35771543 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05762711864 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362711864407 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277966101695 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183050847458 0.203846283523 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128813559322 0.137316102897 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82902427341 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.037074148 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 58.4600869744 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5833333333 20.7743622355 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.5565653787 49.517814964 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.916666667 127.492653851 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7743622355 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 52.3799435028 49.1944974215 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.69135802469 1.69124875643 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2117679096 0.332605444948 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101709141876 0.102741220458 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0810611014347 0.0668466124924 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.548924289455 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168380837015 0.148594505496 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10282215853 0.134430193775 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489378243192 0.0742795772207 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.373284259742 0.324371583561 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.037304676325 0.0638462369009 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140426021711 0.228012699653 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402077264039 0.058150111329 69% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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