Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Every individual has different level of acceptance level in their current situation. Some experts claim that, the worst situation like lack of money or unsatisfactory job is good is acceptable, while other argue that, people always try to make the situation better by doing hard work. I partially agree on this statement and the essay will examine the argument on both favour and against of the topic.
To begin with, every people dream is to enjoy every facility in life, but due to many circumstances they have to deal with many difficulties. Lack of employment is one the biggest reason to continue the existing job even employee is not satisfied. They are not in certainty of getting better job after quitting the existing one. For example, mostly the student of university is compelled to stay in one job even they are not happy with its facilities, because of survival and pocket money. Moreover, lack of proper skill and knowledge, lack of experience, extreme competition and being passive to learn new thing are also the affecting factor to tolerate the bad situation of employer. Likewise, lower category employee can also be victim of this situation, due to the lack of technical skill in them and they cannot be assurance of getting next job for survival.
On the other hand, some people believe that, without risk we cannot gain more in our life. However, if people are afraid of taking risk and hard work, they cannot be success in achieving their aim. There are many examples of success only because of hard work rather than being inactive. For Instance, the great footballer pale used to sell tea in train station. Likewise, Ronaldo played many games without proper equipment due to poverty. they all are success in their life and became every one inspiration with their hard work.
In conclusion, tolerating worst scenario can be affected my many current situations of life, while people must believe on themselves and always build up encourage in them to do hard work to achieve targeted goal in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: AFRAID_OF_HEIGHT[2]
Message: The noun should be probably in the plural form: 'risks'.
Suggestion: risks
...However, if people are afraid of taking risk and hard work, they cannot be success i...
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Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ithout proper equipment due to poverty. they all are success in their life and becam...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'tolerating the worst'.
Suggestion: tolerating the worst
...ith their hard work. In conclusion, tolerating worst scenario can be affected my many curren...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93567251462 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5490570016 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549707602339 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1053531325 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150706097509 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470979039501 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639729670212 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10380245745 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719204693914 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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