Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Many experts claim that accepting inferior condition, like unfavorable job or scarcity of money is best while, others argue that people must try harder to get better job and improve situation. I believe that, working harder to get better environment is better to achieve advancement on job and learn and earn more skill and money. This essay will examine the arguments on both topics.
To begin with, people adopt the bad situation due to the lack of skilled knowledge and courage to do something new. People always dream to have everything as they want in life, but due to the lack of courage to take risk in life they stay at same place their whole life whatever the situation is. Mostly the lower-level workers and university student are facing such types of unwelcoming environment in working place. For example, student who has not completed their graduation and without experience have to work in low pay for living cost. Similarly, uncertain future also plays vital role in creating such inferior environment. Due to the lack of employment opportunity in country, people have to accept the unsatisfactory job. Because, they are afraid to get new job easily due to high competition. Thus, many people are compelled to accept unpleasant working environment.
On the other hand, other people argue that, people must not leave hope and always try best to improve the bad situation. All people are not born intelligent, they need opportunity, experience to prove themselves. For instance, famous footballer pale used to sell tea in train station due to poverty but now he is legendry renowned person to the world. poverty did not stop him to achieve him aim, hard work and patient pay off. I think to get advancement on job and earn more, for higher living standard people need to improve the situation by working patiently and strategically rather than accepting the current situation.
In conclusion, there are many factors they stop people to do more and make compelled to accept the unpleasant environment, however they should work harder to get their dream in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 732, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... have to accept the unsatisfactory job. Because, they are afraid to get new job easily ...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Poverty
... legendry renowned person to the world. poverty did not stop him to achieve him aim, ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02312138728 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68150158184 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534682080925 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7042593318 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.235294118 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26072074528 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804636787838 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074229249375 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151700262172 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751551447539 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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