Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Give your opinion and discuss this issue
Having an opinion supposed that people should agree with life though it is a bad situation or lacking finance. In my point of view, I disagree with that definition of owning to a better quality of life.
It is apparent that life just occurs only once per individual, so living meaningful years is extremely mandatory so that you will not think about regrets at the end of your life. Firstly, passing the barriers and then having the best things.
If discussing partly teenagers, to be honest, in their mind, they just take care of themself and pay attention to exterior society such as outdoor activities, bars, leisure times with friends, going shopping,... but forget that their parents are become older and get more diseases than the past. Additionally, in that cases, the young people do not have enough knowledge to make a massive amount of money, they blame for everything and start to accept bad situations like unemployment, poverty, arguments,... From that severe reality, these individuals ought to spend time changing attitudes to soar, become different versions from themself.
So you need advice. In my think, you should make an enormously huge effort, specifically in all things which are difficult. If you are a homeless people, do not give, try your best, even you do not have a handful of the breed to eat, try to apply for works in factories, a lifeguard at swimming pools, and have a number of coins buying merchandises. On the one hand, when you accomplish the first achievement, I am sure you will extremely happy. From that time, the motivations and targets will help people building a mighty life.
And finally, if you are an adult, having money helps you nourish your children, buy them many toys on your own, and parents steadily proud of their sons or daughter. Furthermore, when relatives have to face with sick, you can pay money the fee to treat their sicks, save their life. One more thing, having a better and well-paid job will push you to work effectively. So do not give up owning to tiredness or laziness, just think about the future and you will become a successful person.
In conclusion, I disagree with stability in thinking which is called “ accepting bad situations “ because being a tolerant person is maybe unacceptable. So, let’s use your whole life devoted to life, works, people around you to smile happily before you died.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, then, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86945812808 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63576836371 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593596059113 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.258633051 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.052631579 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158126958483 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476121854177 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046179489825 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863869130065 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336322620606 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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