Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Nowadays almost all individuals are grappling with various tough situations such as money or inappropriate job conditions. It is claimed by some people that the best approach toward this situations is accepting them, whereas others believe that try to make things better and make progress is the best solution. There are rational arguments on both sides of this contentious topic with my own opinion.
On the one hand, there are those reasoning that accepting this circumstances is the best way to deal with the problem. To begin with, most of the people have ups and downs in their life, and having tough situation is not necessarily a bad thing. People can take advantage of these situations to acquire higher personality, widen experience and more patience. Consequently, the more they struggle with their problems, the more it is easier for them to deal with bigger crisis in the future. Also another reason which supports this idea is that not all efforts necessarily have fruitful outcomes. Working hard and not having progress could lead to mental problems.
However, the reason why others including me hold the view that accepting these situations can be seen as an opportunity is that they can be milestone in people’s life. Hard times motivate people, and accepting them and will stop them to be satisfied with what they have. One proposed approach is that they use them as a golden opportunity to develop their hard and soft skills including communication or computer skills. Due to the fact that the more skillful a person is, the more chance he or she has to get a good job and higher wage.
In conclude, there are two approach toward hard situations accepting them or try to make progress which discussed in details, however, this is my firm conviction that making effort to enhance situations is by far the best way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, whereas, as to, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95161290323 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66293986024 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538709677419 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8213484945 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.642857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249793750768 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796308360802 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785326922232 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163477776001 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866872722426 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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