Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Every individual is unique either in one way or the other with their peers based on circumstances. It is often a debatable issue by a large number of people that accepting a bad situation is one of the best decisions in people’s lives, whereas others argue that continuous progress can improve the existing situations. In my opinion, I certainly believe in the latter view and in this essay, I will explore both sides with proper conclusion.
To commence with, decision-making skill plays a pivotal role in few situations such as unsatisfied work and economic crisis. This is because of twofold central reasons, first and foremost a poor or little guidance makes them entitled with fear due to which they deny attempting any risks in their monotonous lives. Secondly, because of the influence of both external and internal factors these people lack a lucid view of their future. Thereby, they fail to face any challenges. To illustrate, most young adults, with their fear of unemployment in this contemporary society, are dealing with stress and depression because of their irrelevant jobs with low income and under high pressures.
On the other hand, despite common beliefs, there exist some individuals who are confident about their intellectual and educational hunger that drives them to step into terrible situations. As an outcome, they can achieve their goals with perseverance and diligence. Moreover, few people tend to acquire higher positions in their career, so they seek help to fulfil their aspirations by accepting ebbs and flows throughout the journey. For instance, one of the finest football players, Christian Ronaldo, despite his poor financial status, his affirmation to join the national football team made him work in numerous part time jobs.
To recapitulate, when it comes to unpredictable and terrible phases in one’s life, people often divide their choices, some support accepting these flaws is the best solution to acquire satisfaction. However, others think that one should not satisfy with the current status in order to have a fortune future, and I support this attitude as we need to pile up confidence to achieve great heights
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24068767908 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81712112423 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63323782235 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8923719565 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.642857143 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169631945281 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577271589379 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605540855378 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106871830679 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658492416168 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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