Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People hold conflicting points of view about whether to be under bad circumstances, the best way is to adapt to this by taking an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money as an example. However, I would argue that whatever will have the solution if being state eager to improve and enhance is always the better way
On the one hand, accepting a bad situation can bring about numerous remarkable things that are needed to mention. First, for some people, racing with modern life frequently puts a plenteous burden on our back, which can result in nerve-rack time that things are beyond our control, gradually negatively influencing on physical and mental health. Therefore, feeling contented with what they have or staying forever with their jobs can help them reduce their stress, and have less anxiety as well as depression. For example, English become the global lingua franca and it can help people to upgrade their position with a high salary. However, It is indispensable that people ignore this and accepting with their position
On the other hand, the more modern life is, the more difficult everything is. Therefore, struggling with setbacks always gives rewarding experiences and social skills that sooner or later will help you later in life. As a result, those people who are willing to face up to every obstacle tend to have a successful life. There is no shame when we fail provided we have tried harder to be the best version of ourselves. Let's take a proverb as an example, “Where there is a will, there is a way”
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86259541985 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58538698476 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2544833793 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.4 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163651295279 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597162966688 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634460377713 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115910141069 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687988636696 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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