Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give opinions.
While many people claim that the acceptance of unwilling circumstances is the best solution, this essay agrees that attempting certain situations is a more favorable and optimal approach.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that accepting adverse circumstance provide several benefits. One of the major benefits is the sense of fulfillment and happiness. Indeed, the sense of misfortune of people originates from the harsh competition in the social circle, which lead to an infinite attempt to enhance competitive advantages and achieve their burning ambition. As a consequence, ambitious people can be highly susceptible to a wide range of physical and mental health conditions. For example, young people can be suffered from “peer pressure” because of the availability of social media, they could easily be experienced proud achievements in their social circle. Therefore, the more peer pressure they have, the less self-esteem and mental exhaustion they earn.
On the other hand, it is clear that attempting to overcome negative situations is beneficial. One of the main advantages is achieving stunning success in later life. No doubt, when a child was born in a harsh condition, her life would be fulfilled by inevitable and infinite difficulties. If the child can be seeded and nurtured with the dogged determination to strive for better in these situations, consequently, she can move up in life. Another benefit is avoiding the sense of regret in the future. It is true that human beings will frequently look back on their life and feel disappointed about capitulating decisions and activities they did. Therefore, continued effort and a perseverant mindset are virtually possible approaches for them.
In conclusion, while accepting adverse circumstances may be advantageous to a certain degree, it seems advisable that attempting overcome unfavorable situations is more beneficial due to achieving brilliant success and regardless of the sense of regret in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44805194805 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11335027057 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581168831169 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7262431919 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.866666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0851793938598 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285425866195 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386489244189 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653351275724 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332541438333 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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