Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or a shortage of money. Others agree that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
When faced with negative life events which can include bankruptcy or career dissatisfaction, some individuals think the principal thing to do is accept that circumstance while other people would rather attempt to better their lot. Efforts to change their present state may lead to extreme disappointment for some, leaving those who succeed feeling euphoric. I think every person who can achieve a better sort of life should make every attempt to do so however, this essay will also discuss both views.
Firstly, there are many for whom the will to advance their station is non-existent. Secondly, they may have attempted and failed several times prior. Such people would therefore understandably resist the impulse to do anything to change their current situation. Furthermore, it may also be that they find peace in allowing events to play out around them due to the nature of their faith or their religion. Such people may believe for instance that everything that happens to them is either preordained or the will of God. Interestingly, people with such a mindset are amongst the most satisfied people as reported by a recent study online.
Conversely, other individuals would rather attempt to turn their lives around. They believe that such attempts may eventually succeed and through their faith, that small sliver of hope may be enough to galvanize them into action with favorable results that lead to a generally happier and more fulfilling existence. For example, some people who attempt to modify their behaviors through forming a new habit or breaking a bad one succeeds in doing so, thereby significantly improving their lives.
In my opinion, it is better for everyone to at least put in the effort necessary to change bad circumstances to good ones as this may either result in a better state of affairs or at least a life without regrets. For instance, people from poor backgrounds should at least attempt to get a university education by getting good grades in secondary school and gaining scholarships instead of succumbing to poverty without fighting for a better life. If they get a university degree, such persons may find gainful employment. If they fall short of their goal, they will at least know they tried.
In conclusion, while there are people who would be alright in any condition they find themselves, and other individuals who would rather make every effort to better their chance at a good life, I believe that all human beings must at least make the effort to improve their lives.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, sort of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05755395683 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68303423692 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6703401525 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.058823529 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5294117647 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0588235294 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137934906867 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052523097931 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341112327745 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084738544784 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015468614626 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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