Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some individuals consider that the best way to deal with the problem in their life gets to accept a bad situation such as a disappointing job or deficiency in wealth. Conversely, there are some people who think that it is better to strive and enhance such situations.
The poor always strive to overcome their current condition to have a better life, their children can travel anywhere they want,… Unfortunately, they do not have the ability to expense their needs as well as their children’s desire even electricity and water bills because of the poor knowledge, the lack of a degree, not even graduated high school. Thus, they also can not seek job prospects and opportunities. It is meaning that they tolerate the existing job and condition.
On the other hand, people in developed and developing countries must put the most effort into their work due to the increasing growth of the economy whole of the world. If they do not have effort and skills in their work, they will be taken the sack to change another employee better. Hence, to survival in the existing workplace require employee must hard work, improve skills, knowledge,… to guarantee to pay for rent, gas bill, electricity bills, and the cost of living,… Therefore, successful people and the rich believe that the worth of effort will help yourself breakthrough obstacles in life.
In conclusion, getting a miserable situation or shortage of money also overwhelmed by yours. “Accept” to get motivation, strive for the condition in this life is better and can help the poor, the handicap, and the community.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02272727273 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8149929009 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.9466518436 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.6 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169805458735 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775536142263 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695806311495 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122599737629 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981116303242 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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