Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an
unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try
and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It would be argued that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as unsatisfactory job or money shortage, but some believe that it is better to put in efforts to improve such situations.
On the one hand, some people choose to accept a bad situation as they think by going along with the bad situation something good might happen. They have go with the flow kind of mentality and do not have the courage to take big steps to improve the situation. For instance, a person might dissatisfied with his/her job but may not look for a new job opportunity because he thinks he might be able to perform better in future because he is gaining experience in a bad situation. Another example can be taken of one such person with shortage of money. This person might accept his fate and try to live with less expenditure instead of earning more.
On the other hand, others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. These type of people think that if they do not do anything about the situation it may get worse and they might be in trouble in future. For example, one such person with a unsatisfactory job may raise his voice against it at his workplace and might even quit if his/her demands are not met. The person might look for better job opportunities instead of sticking with job security. Another such person with shortage of money might start working a part time job to meet his expenses instead of cutting down his expenditure.
In conclusion, although one can choose both to accept the bad situation, I personally believe that when facing a bad situation one should first analyze the situation and try to put in efforts to find a solution to the problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
... something good might happen. They have go with the flow kind of mentality and do ...
^^
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...hand, others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. These type of ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... get worse and they might be in trouble in future. For example, one such person with a un...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ture. For example, one such person with a unsatisfactory job may raise his voice ...
^
Line 5, column 533, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...shortage of money might start working a part time job to meet his expenses instead of cut...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d first analyze the situation and try to put in efforts to find a solution to the...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57284768212 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56257377485 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46357615894 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0685461597 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.083333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321792014931 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140662964964 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108990767666 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244685554259 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916997321801 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.