Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as unsatifactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many experts say that, accepting the bad situation of career like insufficient salary or unsatisfactory job is fine, while, others argue that, employees must switch their job for the improvement in career. This essay will examine the arguments on the both favor and against of the topic.
To begin with, employee easily welcome any situation in career by thinking the long term of benefit. People believe that they will have stable career with one employer and good god pension and health insurance in old age, so they accept the unsatisfactory situation sometime in career. However, people sometime stay at same job whatever the situations are, lack of employment opportunity as per the capabilities. For example, mostly student cannot get the relevant job as per their study, so they are tended to stay at same job. Moreover, when a people work lifetime with a single company, the higher trust they can gain from the owner and can get more responsibility in work. Likewise, gradual increment in salary, promotion in company, work as a part of a team with leaders are the expectation of employee in long term career. So, they agree to accept the challenging condition in their life.
In contrast, other people argue to stay in same company with unsatisfaction. However, they often change job to further their career and try to learn different skill in life. This help them to improve the professional career and personal life standard as well. In fact, there are many example of successful person, whose path goes with difficulties and challenges only. For Instance, Pale the great player on the history of football, his family do not have money to provide training and to join football club and did many past time job for his survival in teenager. As a result, now he is known best footballer only with after dealing many challenges.
In conclusion, both conditions and arguments are acceptable as per the situation. While, employees must know that only after the hard work and challenging task only they will receive the success in their life.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun example seems to be countable; consider using: 'many examples'.
Suggestion: many examples
...fe standard as well. In fact, there are many example of successful person, whose path goes w...
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Line 5, column 522, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... and to join football club and did many past time job for his survival in teenager. As a ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 589, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'known the best'.
Suggestion: known the best
...val in teenager. As a result, now he is known best footballer only with after dealing many...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6918669058 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565597667638 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2242325348 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.882352941 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163655532506 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533191688931 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460398068614 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102620501363 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488522150348 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun example seems to be countable; consider using: 'many examples'.
Suggestion: many examples
...fe standard as well. In fact, there are many example of successful person, whose path goes w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 522, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... and to join football club and did many past time job for his survival in teenager. As a ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 589, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'known the best'.
Suggestion: known the best
...val in teenager. As a result, now he is known best footballer only with after dealing many...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6918669058 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565597667638 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2242325348 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.882352941 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163655532506 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533191688931 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460398068614 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102620501363 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488522150348 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.