Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Few person thinks it is always good to accept the fate and shows reluctance to change while many people assess the situation and improve their shortcomings. The first option is good at some situation, but, why many people prefer the latter option, will be discuss in further paragraphs.
In today’s world the technology is at epitome provided that there are serious consequences such as unsatisfactory job and irregularities in financial budget. The machines are replacing the jobs of human as well as lack of skills causes to take employment in different field, thus, results in less fulfilment at work. For instance jack ma the famous leader of Chinese conglomerate worked as tourist guide, waiter and at last teacher also, but, he survived his tough days and now he is the chairman of company. Moreover, this hard times act as catalyst for improving oneself as wise person.
However, there are some persons who solely depend on fate to improve their situations. There are several factors such as negative environment around them as well as lack of self-confidence to accept change. But, sometimes it is better for example my friend Mario who purchased the share of tech company called apple and never sold them despite of ups and downs. This is similar to catch diamond in trash. Although, luck does play an important role but we should always strive for hard work to improve our situations.
In my opinion, there are several factors which affects our life and results in bad situation, but, we should not lose hope and take a positive approach by accepting it and move forward.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun person seems to be countable; consider using: 'Few people', 'Few persons'.
Suggestion: Few people; Few persons
Few person thinks it is always good to accept the ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
... human as well as lack of skills causes to take employment in different field, thus, re...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98501872659 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68912814412 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3570447947 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.916666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177788137686 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573808012739 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381803809179 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970386091066 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217672987009 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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