Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that it would be better to accept the unwell situation likely the dissatisfied work or insufficient money. Others mention that we have to do something to improve these situations. While I believe there are some advantages if we accept those circumstances, I still believe that we could spend our efforts on those to make our life greater.
There are several reasons why people think we should accept our problems. First of all, there is one way to make ourselves do not get depressed is that learns how to face unpleasant situations. Unsatisfactory employment, for example, there are always some troubles at work that we could not avoid, so if people still want to keep their job and earn money, they have to live with their dissatisfaction. Another reason is that we should accept unavoidable diseases. The research shows that the people those who accept to live with their cancer usually have a longer life, compared to those people who are just blaming their situations.
It is true that we could adopt some measures to break horrible issues. Firstly, facing challenges and solving problems could help individuals find out their abilities as well as talents. Therefore, that could bring more changes in their careers. Secondly, changing bad situations not only help people in practical life, but it also helps to improve their mental health problems. For instance, people who always try to overcome their bad problems are more likely to have a happier life because they might not get stress from their problems.
In conclusion, while there could be some advantages if we accept and please with what we have now, including trouble in life, I still believe that there are other better ways to improve such these issues, which brings a better life for us.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0033557047 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57767271949 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530201342282 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2977900103 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202377788921 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073325500234 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557975747953 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141561724911 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542079329106 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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