It could be said that accepting a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or lack of money is best. However, there is an another opinion that trying to change and improving such conditions is better. I agree with the second statement and there are some reason that will support my opinion.
To begin with, people all over the world, are involved in serious situations where they have to work hard from early in the morning till late night . Still, they cannot get larger salaries, which is only enough to live without luxury. The reason behind this problem is a lack of jobs worldwide. In this case, if they quit their jobs, they would be helpless to live on roads without money or food, therefore they cannot afford to do so. That is why, people consider it a better option to accept situations in their life that are difficult.
on the other hand, sometimes people try to fight with problems and they got succeed. Moreover, they become able to get improved position at workplace. For example, one of my friend miss. Raman work for a terrible company, which made her work in the bad situations like in unsatisfaction and less salary. However, she consultanted many people from his parents to friends and his decision to change the job released her from bad situation. She also moved to the better place to live in and new job gives her a larger salary and free time now.
I think, through understanding the case of my friend, I firmly believe that the improvement from the worse situation absolutely makes people happier and more comfortable in their life.
In conclusion, I definitely agree with the opinion that people should do not compromise with the unfavourable condition, instead of this, they should fight with the problematic situations to convert them in happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85342019544 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60873340236 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583061889251 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3468835065 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228844340987 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078941141476 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931842091783 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135548344274 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132497456805 0.056905535591 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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