Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research ,business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
In scientific research, business and the education world some people are of the belief that it is advantageous to share as much information as possible. Other people believe that sometimes information is too valuable or too important to be freely shared. I firmly believe that some some information is just so important and valuable to be shared freely.
Some people from the Academic world, Business and People working on scientific research believes that it is good to share as much information as possible. They believe that by sharing more information more people will get to know them or their Brand. This will in return be advantageous to them as there will be more sales and more fame. For instance,Last year in 2018 a company called XYZ made over 1000% profits by sharing the complete list of ingredients used in their product.
On the other side. However, people believe that sometimes knowledge or information is so much valuable that it cannot be shared freely. People believe that if this information is shared freely more people who are in similar business or working on similar research projects will try to emulate them. As a result of which their brand value will deteriorate ,Ultimately leading to decrement in sales and fame. A great example of this is Coca Cola company. The recipe of this famous soft drink is so secret that only a handful of people knows about this recipe in more than 150 years. It is one of the most protected things on the planet.This leads to making them one of the biggest companies in the planet.
In conclusion, I would like to say that though some people believe that sharing more information is advantageous but I firmly disagree with this. I am of the strong belief that sometimes information is just too valuable or important that it cannot be shared in public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87138263666 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68207296115 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440514469453 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0102268311 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.512503270437 0.244688304435 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197028380563 0.084324248473 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17544428173 0.0667982634062 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.387880859646 0.151304729494 256% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17848510804 0.056905535591 314% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.