Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.
Discuss both views and five your opinion.
Many people claim that, providing facts and details about self is good enough for the innovation world of today, while other argue that, people have their own secret and privacy which must not be shared and used for any kind of research. I partially agree on this statement, this essay will examine the arguments on favour and against on the topic.
To begin with, today’s world is of creating a new innovation every day in different fields like science, business or in academic world, so for new creation relevant details, data are necessary. However, people should not grant permission to take any kind of personal details for any research. Nowadays, social media is becoming the main source to collect data of any people as per their needed. For instance, different kind of survey related page and update in social media ask to fill the form and personal details, and all this details are kept in their system as backup. Moreover, with the help of social media information different types of virtual crime are taking place in society and hacker are misleading information. For example, one of the survey had revealed that, social crime and number of hacker are increase in high portion on recent years. Furthermore, leaking secret message and photos of people are the example and people are also felling unsecure for using social site like facebook, twitter, etc as well.
On the other hand, we cannot deny that without relevant information scientific survey cannot be done. So, after taking any kind of details from the personal details must be misuse and prove to any kind of hacker, or without permission of anyone not any details should use for survey. For example, various social site must not kept any kind of backup of personal information and after paper survey, paper of details must not be thrown in any public area.
In conclusion, Sharing any kind of personal information is not healthier, this led to the increase in different kind of crime in society, so only with protective way information must be collected with everyone with permission.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...in with, today’s world is of creating a new innovation every day in different fields like scie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95100864553 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45489503773 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50144092219 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2924749161 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.153846154 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118933908722 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480890279441 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431438982632 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872172887951 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204116052327 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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