Some people believe laws change human behaviour. Do you agree with it?
Laws are introduced and impose on people to prevent any crime or offences. Rule of law is a kind of discipline for someone who thinks they can do anything they like. Also, it provides reassurance for the general public to be safe and feel secure.
First of all, We need to understand why they need to introduce a certain law, what kind of criminal behaviour we are trying to eliminate from our society. For example, if we need to introduce law related to road rule, we need to educate people regarding this law so It is known to the public and they can understand the consequences of this changes. Also making clear why these laws are important, will make the younger generation responsible for their own actions. By seeing and comprehending the outcome, people do feel scared and they do change, improve their behaviour.
Secondly, laws not only improve and change human behaviour in a positive manner it also impacts on the negative side too. such as if fleeing from crime or offence due to the fear of being prosecuted or been charged in the past makes situations worse. To prevent this type of errors, the law should also provide comprehensive education or rehabilitation facility to prevent from reoccurring.
Thirdly, some of the laws hard to understand for the general public it should be simple and accessible. Any changes should be available on social media, this makes people aware as it has a wider approach.
Finally, making aware of law is important, this can result in a person changing their behaviour towards their actions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: public
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Suggestion: Also,
...stand the consequences of this changes. Also making clear why these laws are importa...
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...only improve and change human behaviour in a positive manner it also impacts on the negative side to...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople aware as it has a wider approach. Finally, making aware of law is importan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87878787879 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70190219699 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9536779319 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0769230769 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225922297974 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086815805032 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589171998132 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127654229659 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135834774124 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.