Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It has always been a highly controversial issue that urban lifestyle whether making our life convenient or increasing more difficulty. While some people argue that citizens’ health in downtown would suffer from released toxic exhaust and stress from intense traffic jam, I agree with this viewpoint, but there are some beneficial sides.
On the one hand, currently, it is reported that people in big cities as Bangkok are risking in severe lung-related diseases. Breathed air have been contaminated by three distinctive gases, including carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide and sulfur dioxide, which are produced by the numerous number of vehicles on the street. Besides physical ailments, mental health is affected from daily stress. The personnel always spend about two hours for commutation from their home to workplace with traffic jam, though they use public transports, namely BTS and MRT, facing the same problem. According to competitive lifestyle, crowding in skytrain is the serious situation which makes people to be a bit selfish. Furthermore, cost of food in the big city is higher than certain rural, most metropolitan has no choice and inevitably assume the expenses.
On the other hand, it is an undeniable that the main office of grand companies is stated in big cities which hire workforces with high salaries. As students side, high ranked universities are normally placed in downtown, if they live in there, traveling time will be reduced. Another reason is many leisure places which young people enjoy visiting, for example, department stores, amusement parks, zoos and art gallery.
In conclusion, although it is common belief that living in urban is unwise decision, I think this approach might suit for some people with different aspects.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37410071942 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71390898945 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697841726619 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0483792619 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121896076722 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413982693713 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332630461156 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727548493597 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0059964481087 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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