Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
When it comes to lifestyle, there are a plethora of views about living in city. Some think that life in the urban is getting rather more challenging; conversely, others suppose that living in modern cities is not difficult. In my essay, I will not only discuss both views but also give my compelling reasons to advocate for the first opinion.
On the other hand, a rise in expenditure and high rate of criminals are the most frequent problems that residents in urban area confront. In comparison about basic necessaries and rent cost, there is a big gap between the price in city and countryside and this begets an obstacle for those who have low salary. To afford the price, many people have to work one or even two side jobs. Relating to crime, the criminal rate in cities is usually at higher rate with various crimes from minor such as to major such as killing. This issue not only has threatens lives but also causes the worries for both inhabitants and visitors.
On the other hand, living in a cosmopolitan place brings numerous merits about both quality of life and big chances to pursue career path. Whether living in a modern city is challenging or not is therefore a rather redundant question. Myriad policies of government were implemented to improve standard of life in almost cities by constructing top-notch infrastructure. Indeed, all of hospitals and universities in metropolitan have much more modern than those in suburb. Urban inhabitants, therefore, are likely to be accessed better medical treatments and education. About employment, virtually both national and foreign groups have their head quarter in large cities; thus, they provide countless positions for employer via their factories and projects. When having multiple choices of jobs, earning money or choosing suitable job with handsome salary is become easier. Moreover, working in large enterprises give opportunity to promote career and that is the reason why more and more young-aged people flock to cities.
In conclusion, ignoring some demerits relating to crimes and high cost, cities bring a plethora benefits including a better quality of life and more chance in career. Those merits play pivotal roles to enjoy life better and that is the reason why I advocate for living in urban.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...at residents in urban area confront. In comparison about basic necessaries and rent cost, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0664893617 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6670519883 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577127659574 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9757471836 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.833333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246164544634 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683503897404 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564066493882 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152849608574 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875064664392 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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