Some people believe that nowadays we have too much choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Globalization has made our modern world, a small global city. This opens the door to a variety of choices a person has to make on a daily basis. It is clearly agreed that we are obligated to decide on whole lots of things in our lives. Analyzing the options we have when it comes to products and education, will clarify the picking dilemma.
Firstly, it is not easy as a pie selecting brands of clothes, shoes and hygienic products. Take the example of hair shampoo, it comes in thousands of different types that are varying in composition, prices, being organic or not, colors and even smells. Having this much diversity of categories in a basic daily consumption item leaves lots of people unable to decide properly. Thus, it is quite obvious that purchasing household items can be challenging to an extent.
Secondly, our novel lifestyles have imposed diverse kinds of studies and work. For instance, if someone desires to advance in a career, he might want to do a course of study in a certain field. Preferences for this program may vary between online, face to face, private tutoring, and a list of choices that can go on. As a result, schooling opportunities are highly variable which might not be great when it comes to choosing a suitable one.
In summary, choosing personal care items as well as plans for education is not always effortless. People today have trouble making up their minds about almost everything in life. It is predicted that this issue will continue to grow in size and scale into the foreseeable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, in summary, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80827067669 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63230118983 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646616541353 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.862010719 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.2666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13250919902 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379821235519 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374143672527 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725397131179 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018972625094 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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