Some people believe that in order to reduce crimes, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.
Nowadays, social safety is always one of the hottest topics among every citizen. there is a contention on whether prison is the most effective approach to reduce crime rate or there are some optional chooses. In my view, I believe that some ways are more effective solutions.
it is true that prison is the most common punishment in many countries. it has existed for thousands of years in the history of human beings. Indeed, prison is a practicable approach tp protect normal people from the danger of criminals. it limits the liberty of people who has legally proven to be harmful to other citizens. And it also can work as a deterrent, meaning that people avoid repeating the same offence. For example, since drunk driving people are sentenced to be in prison in China, this phenomenon has been rare to see for now.
However, I believe that longer prison cannot reduce the rate of crime effectively. Because is has no abilities to tackle the root causes of crime. many criminals, who commit thieving, cheating and robbery, are lack of school education, which makes it extremely difficult for them to find employment and earn their lives. Even worse, some of them attribute their unemployment to society and cultivate the anti-social personality. In order to raise themselves from poverty and revenge to whole society, they choose to commit some crimes and make damage to strangers.
In conclusion, longer prison might be effective to curb crime, but there are more viable ways. For instance, government can provide job training to people who accept poor education and create more employment vacancy. In other word, increasing the rates of employment is the essential approach to reduce crime rates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06360424028 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62764984257 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590106007067 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.456364945 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.2941176471 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265646967821 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790506086489 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057895416118 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150654559121 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329173277256 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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